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Spring Mini-Blog Tour: Four Writing Qs Answered

Today on The Writing Well, I’m taking part in a mini-blog tour! It’s fun to share a little bit about my writing process and to recognize three other writers.

Thanks to Dr. Carol Cooper, a talented London “chick-lit” writer and The Sun’s newspaper doctor, for inviting me to be on her blog, , last Monday. Her blog is filled with wonderful tidbits about parenting, health and her journey writing romantic women’s fiction.

The tour involves each of us answering four questions about writing. The same questions are then passed on to three new writer-bloggers. Be sure to check out the blogs for Sharon, Megan and Shane, who I introduce below, and who will carry the blog torch forward next Monday. Now, it’s my turn!

Q. What am I currently working on?

I’m in the editing phase of my debut historical fiction novel, Torrential. Set in Dayton, Ohio, in 1912, Torrential follows Irishman Kieran Gregor who survives the Titanic’s sinking paralyzed by guilt. He begins a new life in Dayton, taking a job with his uncle and letting a room in a downtown boardinghouse. There, he meets Hannah, the beautiful 17-year-old daughter of the house’s proprietors. He denies his growing attraction for Hannah, who is expected to marry Dayton’s youngest city engineer. Soon, Kieran must confront his past and his feelings for Hannah when a horrific flood hits Dayton and puts the boardinghouse’s inhabitants in peril.

My book is now with a professional editor, who will help me refine my manuscript in preparation for pitching it to agents and publishers this summer.

Q. How does my work differ from others of its genre?

Rendering of the Titanic sinking.

Rendering of the Titanic sinking.

Two things come to mind – first, the story line. I believe I’m the only author to bookend a novel around two disasters that struck within a year of each other – the RMS Titanic’s sinking and the 1913 Great Dayton Flood.

Second is the degree to which I intermingled my fictional characters with historical figures in Dayton. These men, including John H. Patterson, the controversial yet brilliant founder of N.C.R., played heroic roles in the disaster and the city’s remarkable recovery.  I was able to draw upon a rich reservoir of historical research to recreate Dayton in the early 20th century, as well as the flood and its aftermath.

Beyond just the usual newspaper archive material, I interviewed a journalist who has covered the flood for 30 years, two family members of Arthur Morgan, the engineer who designed Dayton’s permanent flood control system, a national weather historian and Dayton’s chief water conservancy engineer. I believe all this research lends a level of detail and authenticity to my novel.

Q. Why do I write what I do?

I love history, I love place and I love stories of heroes who overcome adversity and triumph.  If I can bring all these elements together, then it’s a win-win for me and my readers.

Q. How does my writing process work?

I begin with an idea or a spark that gets my creative juices going. For Torrential, it was my

My grandmother and great-parents in Dayton, circa 1911-12.

My grandmother and great-grandparents in Dayton, circa 1911-12.

grandmother’s stories of her family surviving the flood when she was a small child. They lived in and operated a boardinghouse in downtown Dayton. Her recollections included the heroic role of the carpenters at the nearby National Cash Register Company, who built boats that saved trapped residents. She witnessed one of these boat rescues of an elderly neighbor from an upstairs window.

From there, I sketch out my main characters and the supporting figures who will move the story along, and the key plot line. Then I just pour the story onto paper. After a while, my characters become real and they speak to me. Two years into this, they sound like part of the family. The editing phase of my writing is the hardest. It’s difficult to cut, and that’s where a good editor and advance readers come in.

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Introducing Three Dynamic Writers

Now, here are three fellow authors, who will showcase their writing process next Monday.
Megan HeadshotMegan Cutter is a professional writer, editor, and social media strategist with over 18 years of experience in the field. Her expertise includes manuscript and article editing, as well as copy writing for websites, newsletters, magazines, and social media campaigns.  Together, Megan and her husband Barton, published their first memoir, Ink in the Wheels: Stories to Make Love Roll, highlighting their relationship as an inter-ability couple.

Her newest memoir, Leaving Traces: Diving from the Nest, will be published in 2015.

A. Shane Etter, a supernatural thriller writer, has penned two novels, Bottom Dwellers and Mind ShaneEtterDwellers. Both books follow a team of talented individuals as they battle a global community of powerful mutants who can read their minds and communicate telepathically.
Shane is a native son of Mississippi. He is proud of the great literary heritage of his home state and that some of the finest 20th Century authors, like William Faulkner, Eudora Welty, John Grisham and others have called it home. Shane has taken a number of writing workshops and classes by such noted authors as his mentor and two-time Pulitzer nominee Jedwin Smith, author/literary agent Nancy Knight, Mary Helen Stefaniak and Kaylie Jones, daughter of the great James Jones (From Here to Eternity),

Shane is a member of the Atlanta Writers Club and he makes his home in Warner Robins, Georgia.

KD HoskinsSharon KD Hoskins has been a communication specialist for more than 20 years. Her first novel, To Handcuff Lightning, was a 2010 Eric Hoffer Award finalist. She is currently working on her third book, Polishing Up Heaven. All her stories are told with humor, candor, and the expectation that love will eventually show up.

She is a member of the Atlanta Writers Club and enjoys reading literary and historical fiction, contemporary humor, and mysteries solved by a cat. Read her blog here.


Q&A with Author of Bottom Dwellers

“Rushing to Trudy’s side, I knelt beside her. She had no outward signs of being injured, but before I was able to untie her I heard the whoosh of the water being sucked out of the entry. Caliph was coming.”
                                              — Bottom Dwellers
Last weekend I finished  Bottom Dwellers, a love story and SiFi thriller. The main character, Patrick Dylan, encounters a race of secretive mutant people in Georgia’s Lake Lanier while scuba diving.  He also meets Trudy Price, a beautiful park ranger who soon becomes his fiancée.  They discover both good and bad among the bottom dwellers of Lake Lanier, in this fast-paced read written by Shane Etter. Shane does a great job creating suspense in surreal settings — first in an abandoned amusement park at the bottom of the lake, and later, in underground Manhattan where Trudy and Patrick meet another race of dwellers who occupy the city’s abandoned subway and train tunnels.  Patrick and Trudy were easy to root for as they fall in love and face a scary and elusive foe that can read minds and appear when you least expect it.

Here, Shane talks more about the inspiration for his story, and how a stroke drew him into the craft of writing. 

How did you get the idea for Bottom Dwellers? it’s a pretty unique story line with some colorful and in some cases, creepy characters.
I was reading in the Atlanta Journal-Constitution about how the Corps of Engineers acquired the land for the lake, and left the houses there, since they would be under 100+ feet of water.  I immediately turned to my wife and said, “What if there are still people living in those houses?”  The idea was born.  
 Have you always enjoyed supernatural, science fiction and fantasy books?
Not really, I’ve always been kind of a thriller guy, but I’m sure I can move the Dwellers series into a mainstream thriller storyline.
I know you began to write full time after a stroke? Can you tell me how writing and the creative side of your brain has turned on to allow you to pursue being an author?
My stroke was in ’04.  In ’07, my brain really went through a healing cycle and almost overnight I became creative and started writing Bottom Dwellers.
You did a nice job of using setting and place to tell your story – first in the Lake Lanier area of Georgia and later, New York City.  How important is establishing setting as a backdrop for your story?
To me, setting is another character in a story and just as important as other characters.
The main characters in your book, Patrick Dylan and Park Ranger Trudy Price, are pretty compelling. How true-to-life are they to you, especially given that you collect wine and have two standard poodles just like the characters in your book?
Well, my wife, Ellen, is as beautiful as Trudy and gets told she looks like Mary Steenburgen frequently.  Patrick and I are alike in that we are both curious and loyal, but Patrick is taller than me and much braver.  When he first met Caliph and Caliph told him to leave and not come back, I would have been out of there.  Yes, we are wine drinkers and Hawk and Pearl the lights of our lives.
When can readers pick up this story of Patrick and Trudy and these supernatural creatures who live among us? Can you give us a sneak peek of what to expect in your next book and where to get a copy?
      Bottom Dwellers is available now at most online retailers, including the biggest ones.  The next stories in the series are Radiation Dwellers and Island DwellersRDis set in north Georgia at the site of the ruins of the Georgia Nuclear Aircraft Laboratory and find Patrick and Trudy battling a different kind of mutant, mutant tree people.  IDis set in New York City and while in NY for a trial of a criminal they helped capture in Bottom Dwellers, Patrick and Trudy are followed by different mutants this time and it leads them on a quest to discover and expose a worldwide mutant community.
What one aspect of your writing has improved from your first book to subsequent titles in this series that you are now completing?  
      I think I’ve learned how to write a more complex plot on a deeper level, on a simpler level, in Bottom Dwellers I didn’t use many contractions when writing dialogue; now I do.  Everyone uses contractions when speaking naturally.  My writing sounded stiff without them. 
 About Shane Etter
   Shane is a native son of Mississippi.  He is proud of the great literary heritage of his home state and that some of the finest 20th Century authors, like William Faulkner, Eudora Welty, John Grisham and others have called home.  Although Shane is primarily a self-taught writer he has taken a number of writing workshops by such noted authors as Mary Helen Stefaniak, Kaylie Jones, Nancy Knight, and two-time Pulitzer nominee, Jedwin Smith.
Shane makes his home in north Georgia, where he is currently working on the next Patrick Dylan and Trudy Price adventure and where he lives with his wife, Ellen, along with their two standard poodles, Hawk and Pearl.  He is the president of his own small high technology company and collects books and wine; he also enjoys working out in his spare time.

Guest Post: First-time Novelist Shares 4 Lessons

Every Friday during May I am inviting a member of my writer’s group to be a guest blogger. Today I’m excited to introduce new SciFi storyteller Shane Etter, a Mississippi native, who has a knack for bringing the creepy to life in settings ranging from north Georgia to New York City’s underground subway tunnels. I hope you enjoy his insights today on four lessons he’s learned as a first-time author.  I will feature more about Shane and his debut novel in this Sunday’s Relaxing Reads’ book post. Reach Shane on his Bottom Dwellers’ Facebook page.

My first novel, Bottom Dwellers, was published in April of 2011 by Black Rose Writing, a Texas-based small pressBottom Dwellers is a supernatural thriller about green mutant people with gills living on the bottom of one of the largest manmade lakes in the U.S., in north Georgia.  It’s the first of what I anticipate being a series of books to follow with the Dwellers theme of a worldwide mutant community.  
 I’d like to tell you about the things I did right, and more importantly, the things I did wrong. By sharing my experiences, both good and bad, hopefully it will help you along your literary journey.
The main thing I did right was write.   What I mean was, even though I had no training in writing, no degree in English or no MFA, I started writing.  If you have a good idea, start writing.  That is the first and most important thing.  In fact, besides having no training in writing, I was the least creative man you could imagine until I had a stroke, and when my brain started rewiring itself I became creative virtually overnight.
Next thing to mention, is the first mistake I made.  I had heard you should write every day, and I did write most days, but during my  second eight-week writing class under two-time Pulitzer nominee, Jedwin Smith, Jedwin said to write a page every day, and in a year you would have a novel.  So, quantifying the amount of writing for me was better than just saying write every day and it has helped me finish my second novel, Radiation Dwellers, much quicker and get well into my third novel, Island Dwellers, much faster.
Jedwin’s class brings me to the second thing I didn’t do until after my first novel was published:  Find a writing class, at your local Indie bookstore, at a community college near you, or one sponsored by a writing club.  Most authors are very generous with their time and knowledge and many of them teach classes on writing, on the side.  Even though I am a voracious reader, a writing class helped me learn why authors use certain techniques and to apply those techniques.
The third thing I didn’t do and you should is find, or start, a critique group with other like-minded writers — people in a genre similar to yours who you can read to, and bounce ideas off of, for helpful, constructive criticism.  Fortunately I have since found an established critique group with authors who, though fairly new to writing, had achieved a measure success and could help me avoid making some of the same mistakes they did. 
That brings me to the fourth lesson: reach out to other writers in your community.  Offer to buy them a cup of coffee, or lunch.  I do that now and my creativity climbs exponentially by meeting and talking with these creative people.
Shane with John Connolly, who he considers the greatest living author.
Last, read, read, read everything you can find in your favorite genre and other genres as well, and try to copy their techniques.  This thing alone will help you improve your writing as much as anything.  Among my favorite authors are John Connolly and F. Paul Wilson, both of whom write “creepy” novels. Reading and absorbing all of their works gives me better ideas and helps me to get the creative juices flowing.
Finally, never give up!!  Believe me, if I can get published, you can, too.